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Review of Larksong Static: Selected Poems 2005-2020 by Martin Malone, pub. Hedgehog Press
Skimming the poem titles in the early part of this Selected – Barbury Castle, Red Kites at Uffington, Wood on the Downs – you might easily file Malone as a poet of place. And indeed there is a strong element of that in him, as evidenced by the incantatory lists of place-names:
We have been here before. Uffington, Hackpen,
Grim’s Ditch, Ogbourne St.George, Wayland’s Smithy,
Sparshott Firs, Bishopstone and Barbury
(“Wood on the Downs”)
In fact, though, it soon becomes clear that the landscape is a backdrop, albeit a sharply and lovingly observed one- in the title (a phrase from the opening poem) “static” is a noun, not an adjective; the lark-song a buzz at the back of the soundtrack. What is really at the heart of these early poems is the development of the relationships played out against the landscape:
You, me and your son
and the best kite on the hill.
Passing around the string, sharing the pull
of possibility, we are shaken;
shuddering through the kite-tail spine
of ourselves, alone in the moment’s blue
latitude. I look from boy to you
with some sense of new gravities.
An inkling load guyed skyward, upon
the caught breath of an idea murmured
into your ear: you, me, us.
(“Best Kite On The Hill”)
In the impressive poem “Small Lightnings”, person, time and place coalesce completely:
Driving the A4 to Burghclere, last summer
passes me in an ambulance
on the opposite side. The flashing lights
tell me all I need to know: our time
here is taking its leave on a gurney;
worked at by paramedics whose
urgency is slipping with each
There is then a change of focus, to poems from his Great War pamphlet, "Mr Willett's Summertime" (Poetry Salzburg). I knew these poems already and was pleased to meet some of them again, especially “Let us Sleep Now”, in which Wilfred Owen meets his former enemy on a Vienna tram, heading “up the line to Simmering”, the cemetery at the end of the tracks. The war poems form a bridge between the poems already discussed and a group set in the north: Orkney, Shetland, the north of Scotland. These feel, to me, subtly different from the earlier “landscape” poems in that the landscape genuinely is the protagonist, rather than the backdrop to humans and their activities (I can relate to this, because when I moved to Shetland, I found the natural world seeming far bigger in comparison to humans and playing a larger part in my writing). In “Bright Coast”, though humans are still present, the
drawn line of horizon
stretched across a bay
the gods died making
overshadows them, a player in its own right rather than the backdrop to players. “Static” in the title, as I mentioned, is a noun; the one thing it does not connote here is “stationary”. There are constants in this poetry, like the acute observation of people, eg a mother’s embarrassment in a restaurant:
before her God, she wavers
before the cutlery.
and of the natural world:
The hunting pair stirs
a lazy spoon of air
(“Red Kites at Uffington”)
the twittering mis-
fires of a thousand
But there is also clear development, a sense of an authorial viewpoint broadening beyond the personal to the universal. There is also, of course, the odd misfire. I was never sure why “Liverpool-Irish” started rhyming in the middle and then stopped again, but I found it distracting. And I’m not sure the first verse of “Haas Effect” was necessary – I liked the amputee moving into the future “on unsteady leg”, but otherwise the first verse felt like a lecture or instruction leaflet. These, though, are minor quibbles beside the craft that gives us the unsentimental, deeply moving intimacy of “Like I was Your Girlfriend” and “Let us Sleep Now”, and the sure rhythms at the start of “Barbury Castle”:
Meet me at the earthworks
in the small hours on the hill.
Up there, above your childhood,
at the swing-door of first light
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